The readind passage and the lecture are both discussing declination of Torreya taxifoha trees in state of Florida. The writer claims three solution to prodect these trees from declination. However, the lecturer contradicts author opinion. She says, ways mentioned by passage unfortunitly do not give stable solutions.
First bof all, the author states, growing of Torreya taxifoha in the original place in Florida to reestablish their population. The professor refutes tis statement. She says, this solution unlike to be successfull. She states, these trees strongly effect by large climate of region. Furthermore many area become dried and these trees need cold climate to thrive perfectly.
Second, the writer asserts, growing of Torreya in area not in Florida in other regin as an assistant migration might be a helpful solution to encourage them to reproduce. This statement is challenged by professor. She argues, when these trees transfer to other region, they will rapidly growth. This will have negative effect on other native planets. Since, this solution also impractical.
Finally, the reading passage elaborates on growing of Torreya in research center by moving them from wild and preserved in lab to mointer them closely. The lecturer refutes this point. She condends, when these trees grow in clinic, they will be not able to resist deseases. Researching area are very small, moreover, these trees need large space to grow in and to be capable of protect themselve from disease. As a result, this solution is also dose not work to decrease or prevent declination of Torreya trees.
The readind passage and the lecture are both discussing declination of Torreya taxifoha trees in state of Florida. The writer claims three solution to prodect these trees from declination. However, the lecturer contradicts author opinion. She says, ways mentioned by passage unfortunitly do not give stable solutions.
First bof all, the author states, growing of Torreya taxifoha in the orginal place in Florida to reestablish their population. The professor refutes tis statement. She says, this solution unlike to be successfull. She states, these trees strongly effect by large climate of region. Furthermore many area become dried and these trees need cold climate to thrive perfectly.
Second, the writer asserts, growing of Torreya in area not in Florida in other regin as an assistant migration might be a helpful solution to encourage them to reproduce. This statement is challenged by professor. She argues, when these trees transfer to other region, they will rapidly growth. This will have nagative effect on other native planets. Since, this solution also impractical.
Finally, the readind passage elaborates on growing of Torreya in research center byb moving them from wild and preserved in lab to mointer them closely. The lecterer refutes this point. She condends, when these trees grow in clinic, they will be not able to resist deseases. Researching area are very small, moreover, these trees need large space to grow in and to be capable of protect themselve from disease. As a result, this solution is also dose not work to decrease or prevent declination of Torreya trees.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The readind passage and the lecture are ...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ngly effect by large climate of region. Furthermore many area become dried and these trees ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun area seems to be countable; consider using: 'many areas'.
Suggestion: many areas
...by large climate of region. Furthermore many area become dried and these trees need cold ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...need cold climate to thrive perfectly. Second, the writer asserts, growing of T...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...agative effect on other native planets. Since, this solution also impractical. Fin...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Since, this solution also impractical. Finally, the readind passage elaborates ...
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Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le of protect themselve from disease. As a result, this solution is also dose not...
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Line 4, column 449, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dosed'.
Suggestion: dosed
...se. As a result, this solution is also dose not work to decrease or prevent declina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29527559055 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6414741064 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.912924614 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7894736842 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420520713466 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122929555397 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14248711747 0.0662205650399 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293874055238 0.162205337803 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243879064268 0.0443174109184 550% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The readind passage and the lecture are ...
^^
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ngly effect by large climate of region. Furthermore many area become dried and these trees ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun area seems to be countable; consider using: 'many areas'.
Suggestion: many areas
...by large climate of region. Furthermore many area become dried and these trees need cold ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...need cold climate to thrive perfectly. Second, the writer asserts, growing of T...
^^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...agative effect on other native planets. Since, this solution also impractical. Fin...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Since, this solution also impractical. Finally, the readind passage elaborates ...
^^
Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le of protect themselve from disease. As a result, this solution is also dose not...
^^
Line 4, column 449, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dosed'.
Suggestion: dosed
...se. As a result, this solution is also dose not work to decrease or prevent declina...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29527559055 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6414741064 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.912924614 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7894736842 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420520713466 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122929555397 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14248711747 0.0662205650399 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293874055238 0.162205337803 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243879064268 0.0443174109184 550% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.