Nowadays more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be the reason for this? What would you suggest as a solution?
The challenge between elderly people with youngsters in the working sectors is always debatable topic. Ageing population has been a serious contender for all types of jobs and therefore results in the diminishing of youth employees in the work environment. Here, I would like to express various causes and its reasons to deal with this worrying concern.
Abundant causes can be put down behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, old workers are well experienced and skilled in their field and they can tackle any type of deadly situation of the company. For example, excellent senior profession...
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younger employees seem less
younger employees seem less valuable in the company. Thus, older employees outweigh youth staff due their absence of proven performance.
they are helpful in guidance and show a path to success to youngsters in difficult situation and to sense mixed work environment.
younger employees seem less
younger employees seem less valuable in the company. Thus, older employees outweigh young staff due to their absence of proven performance.
they are helpful in guidance and show a path to success to youngsters in difficult situation and to sense mixed work environment.
Description: Look, the issue of this sentence is because of two 'and'. when you put 'and', it should be a parallel structure. While the second 'and', 'and to sense mixed work environment' is parallel to what?
This is one of your big issues.
can you re-write this sentence?
They are helpful in guiding
They are helpful in guiding and to show a path to success to youngsters which could lead to mixed work environment.
which could lead to a mixed
which could lead to a mixed work environment.
is always debatable topic.
is always a debatable topic.
younger employees seem less valuable in the company. Thus, younger employees seem less valuable in the absence of proven performance.
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older employees are replacement for new laborers.
older employees are the replacement for new laborers.
aged population no better choice than the later.
aged population has no better choice than the later.
than experience old generation.
than experienced old generation.
that they also youth and to cooperate with them under difficult situation
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
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