You just moved to a new place and haven’t gotten a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should say:
• where and when you move there
• the differences between your new place and the previous place
Dear Megha,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health. First of all,please accept my sincere apology that I did not get a chance to inform you about moving.Actually,I was literally stuck between my office work and shifting.So I am writing this to tell you finally I have located to a new area "Adarsh Nagar",which is in Versova.
I moved here last Friday,on 27th July.This area is comparatively better than the earlier one.I will explain how.The railway station and bus station are nearby,around 1.5 km from my building.This is closer to my office also as compared to Manisha Apartments where I was leaving before.
The building is spacious enough with a good ventilation.I don't have to be in a rush now to reach to the office.The best part is Grocery and other markets are at walking distance.
Though,I am missing my old neighbours a lot.They were like a family.Here,I haven't interacted with anyone yet.Hope to share a good bond with new people in a new locality as well.
Do come to visit me at my new place next week.
Best Regards,
Manali
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... my new place next week. Best Regards, Manali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81967213115 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06837291724 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.182509786 44.8134815571 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145494200083 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621547809086 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521580103312 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707660135078 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598777834893 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.