Weddings are more expensive in many countries nowadays when compared to the past.
What is the reason behind this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
In the recent time, wedding ceremonies have become costlier as compared to the past.This essay will explain why is it a negative development.
The weddings have become a mode of show off.It has lost its real charm that includes proper rituals to be followed during ceremony.People are ready to spend more amount of money on an expensive wedding.In some places,it has become a status symbol for the people who can manage and afford.
There are many reasons behind this.One of the main reason is the belief of people that such occasion doesn't happen frequently.So they feel of spending most at once.Also,today's generation people have become more conscious about their appearance.They want everything designer and perfect.This includes heavy clothes,matching accessories,jewellery,make up,decoration,lighting,fancy food and so on.So,weddings have become a status symbol for people as a huge chunk of money is spent on music and other arrangements as mentioned.They want to make wedding most remembering and attractive to their guests.Lot is spent on photography and some wealthy people give return gifts to guestes.Hence,all the above mentioned factors increase an overall cost.
I believe it to be a negative development as it increases some unnecessary costs.Many time it happens that food also get wasted in a huge quantity.To make wedding extra ordinary,few people take loans from the bank which often creates trouble for a newly married couple.For example,people who borrow money face tremendous pressure for years in terms of repaying loan along -with other responsibilities.This in long run add stress and anxiety till the time loan is not repayed.
At the end,I would like to say that wedding is a bond between two people and their respective families.So it should be celebrated wisely after discussing pros and cons of expenses, and not to impress people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44673539519 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68375903876 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.85995481 49.4020404114 439% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 317.0 106.682146367 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.2 20.7667163134 280% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14024911569 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733557517293 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387651292221 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733557517293 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387651292221 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.3 13.0946893788 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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