Nowadays, our Earth is being warmer as there are many problems about pollution and damage to the environment. Most countries have many solutions to improve these problems. Therefore I believe that these problems could be solved.
There are many reasons to believe the pollution problems are being solved. For example, several governments are suggesting developing electric transport to replace cars that use diesel fuel. More kinds of new transport are created that do not use fuel such as UAV, metro … These solutions have improved the air quality and reduce carbon dioxin in the air. Besides, people are growing more and more trees to fill space lands, this makes to reduce the warming of the planet.
In the past, the pollution of water like rivers and seas is extremely damage. In recent years, the governments have had many methods to prepare these pollution problems in the locations. For example, they offer many rules to penalty companies or factories that make pollution environment.
In conclusion, although the world has many problems with the environment, I believe that these problems could be solved.
- The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 42
- The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should sp 67
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 56
- The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ny solutions to improve these problems. Therefore I believe that these problems could be ...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'damaged'.
Suggestion: damaged
...water like rivers and seas is extremely damage. In recent years, the governments have ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21546961326 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56158241438 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2176676469 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337666847959 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140146839207 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926999710647 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235122672227 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768317658789 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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