Governments in democratic societies should not restrict the public’s access to information, even if it is of a sensitive or classified nature.
Write a response in which you examine your own position on the statement. Explore the extent to which you either agree or disagree with it, and support your reasoning with evidence and/or examples. Be sure to reflect on ways in which the statement might or might not be true and how this informs your thinking on the subject.
Information is king. With the internet at our fingertips, it is no longer difficult to look up anything and to enhance our understanding of various complex issues and situations. That being said, there is still a lot of sensitive and classified information out there that benefits from staying inaccessible to the public. As such, governments in democratic societies should continue to restrict public access to information that is of sensitive or classified nature.
The most important reason for keeping certain information out of the public’s hand is for national security. Governments currently have vast amounts of information that are extremely sensitive and classified, and this information is vital to the success of various military and political strategies. For example, if the identities of CIA and FBI agents were leaked to the public, hostile foreign forces could also get their hands on this information. This will not only put the lives of our agents in danger, but can hinder various intelligence and security operations being carried out around the world. Similarly, if the locations of military bases were readily made available, foreign military powers or terrorist organizations would benefit from targeting these locations. As such, there is a lot of sensitive and classified nature that is vital for national security and should not be made accessible to the public.
Another good reason for restricting public access to sensitive and classified information is to keep citizens safe. There is a vast amount of information out in the world that is directly tied to individual citizens and consumers. Such information include Social Security Numbers (SSN), banking and financial information, as well as health information. By restricting public access to such sensitive and private information, the government is protecting citizens’ privacy and ensuring their lives are being kept safe. For example, if SSNs were publicly accessible, the amount of identity theft and fraud would undoubtedly skyrocket, leading to more harm than good to the public. Thus, governments should continue to strive to keep such sensitive and private information safe for the overall benefit of the public.
In some extreme cases, restricting public access to certain information can help prevent chaos. In general, most citizens live idyllic lives where the complexities of military operations or the malevolence of foreign threat doesn’t cross their minds on a daily basis. While the news still report tragedies day after day, there are likely enormous incidents that the government is actively trying to prevent or or have obviated that we are still not aware of. For example, the government has probably prevented similar 9/11 terrorist attacks but choose not to disclose this information to the public to prevent public hysteria and chaos. In a similar way that parents shield children from the worst of the world, the government is also shielding its citizens by restricting access to certain classified and distressing information.
Opponents argue that governments that operate in democratic societies should not restrict the public’s access to information regardless of the nature of such information. They will argue that soceity benefits more by being informed than by being in the dark. The largest flaw in this argument is that most information that would benefit the public but not harm any ongoing operations or populations due to its sensitive or classified nature are already being made available to the public. For example, transcripts of political inquiries or papers of publically funded scientific discoveries can be accessed online, and such information not only benefits the public but also puts no one at risk. Thus, opponents who argue that all information should be made accessible to the public are overreaching, as there is no need for all information to be made public as long as important and beneficial information is being made accessible. It is also important to stress that this overreaching would cause more harm than good to society.
In conclusion, the government is the gate between public safety and choas. There is still very important, sensitive and classified information out there that needs to be protected to ensure national security, public safety and the individual safety of citizens. Thus, governments in democratic societies should continue to discern information by nature and continue to restrict the public’s access to sensitive and classified information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'includes'.
Suggestion: includes
...itizens and consumers. Such information include Social Security Numbers SSN, banking an...
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Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: or
...overnment is actively trying to prevent or or have obviated that we are still not awa...
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Line 7, column 638, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...c to prevent public hysteria and chaos. In a similar way that parents shield children from the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 19.5258426966 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 12.9106741573 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3829.0 2235.4752809 171% => OK
No of words: 703.0 442.535393258 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4466571835 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14918898149 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97134586958 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.395448079659 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1194.3 704.065955056 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3107858807 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.633333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4333333333 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243971458219 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929702884201 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887972608541 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170398768635 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511142134405 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 100.480337079 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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