Computers are often argued to be the most important invention in the last one hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last century, there have been numerous crucial inventions that contribute to the development of the world. Among those, many people argue that computers are probably the most important one. In my opinion, this argument is likely to be accurate and I will give my explanations for it in this essay.
To start with, computers are necessary for a wide range of work. For instance, they are used to carry out complicated calculations in the field of accounting, or to help designers to draw and store their sketches. Furthermore, in the future, it is expected that a variety of tasks, which seem to be difficult for humans to do, can be completed entirely by computers. As computers play a significant role in many humans' jobs, they can be considered an essential gadget.
In addition, since computers were invented, they have been consistently improved over the time. While the first computer, which had the size of a large room, could only accomplish a limited number of tasks, computers these days are relatively compact and capable of performing many sophisticated functions. Moreover, the prices of them have been made so affordable that most families nowadays could purchase at least one computer. This astounding development of computers indicates that the applications of them could be far more expanded.
All in all, it can be seen that computers can assist humans in a tremendous number of professions. Additionally, their accessibility to people means that a large percentage of people could benefit from them. Thus, it can be argued that computers are the most important invention made in the last 100 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to carrying'.
Suggestion: used to carrying
...e range of work. For instance, they are used to carry out complicated calculations in the fie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, at least, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07835820896 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93598393571 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4061130069 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221969949101 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826658754361 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888292478227 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13961683427 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488744976952 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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