With the growing technology, the internet has made life easier for mankind as everything is just a click away. Undoubtedly, cyber space helps in learning and entertainment ; however, cyber crimes have also increased drastically. In my opinion, the benefits are far more than drawbacks.
There are myriad pros associated with the use of the internet. First and foremost, the internet promotes knowledge transfer. By reading, studying or watching, any individual can obtain information. It has been proven a good platform for school and College goers. This is because, during pandemic times, students can easily search for study materials, assignments. In addition, similarly in terms of entertainment, cyberspace has taken care of our needs. Because it is prohibited to step outside in a pandemic, we are able to watch movies or shows on OTT platforms without going to theaters. Therefore, technology has given a radical approach to learning and entertainment.
However, there are downsides which cannot be overlooked. Due to increased dependency on online transactions, computer criminal activities are mushrooming. For instance, almost everyone is using online payment methods which makes us vulnerable to cyber hacking. Although these applications make our task easy, it increases the risk of data breach. Sometimes hackers try to insert malicious code in applications resulting in stealing the personal data, however a web application firewall which updates a threat database or real-time is a way to prevent such crimes. Hence, the more cautious we will be while using outline platforms, the lesser the cyber criminal activities will take place.
In conclusion, although there are issues stemming due to excess dependency on use of the internet, this can be prevented through awareness and anti-theft softwares. There is no doubt the advantages are far more than disadvantages. Needless to say that technophobes will have no place in this ever advanced world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52145214521 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05177896158 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660066006601 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2464966589 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.65 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816164943682 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022318413452 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233494063685 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447950020925 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216327342184 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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