Globalization has put so much impact on every sector and provided comfort to people to get anything from anywhere. It is considered by people that having common shops and product as same is positive development while others reckon it negative. This essay will expound both views before reaching to my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are several reasons that why it is positive growth but the first and foremost is easily availability of every good. To elaborate it, availability of everything is good for people as they do not need to go far away to get their favorite things this not only saves their time but money as well. For instance, in past times there were no presence of international brands in India so people used to order and this would take more time and was bit expensive. Consequently, now general attainability is there for people to access anything. Moreover, people have more choices as they can go for local as well international stores.
it does have positive development but it has certain negative result as well and predominant is dilution of national identity. To explain it, no doubt, people can get whatever they want however excess choices may vanish the national identities since individuals get more attracted towards the other nations product which leads to less sale of local products and traditional. For example. nowadays , every mall has a shop of every brand and this is hampering local business and people do not give preference to local attires. As a result, it is not good for local manufactures and putting awful effect, which is indeed not adequate.
To conclude, as per above mentioned piece of writing I opine that it is better to have all shops and products but local enterprises should be neglected by people because it also boosts the economy and this is essential for a combine growth of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91746031746 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71840232197 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4058097364 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128117241224 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490869865957 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076094867353 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917128325194 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065689708282 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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