Apparently, current sources have made people so much mature that they can make their decisions by own. It is the fact that mostly a person only does that whatever he wants to do though he gets suggestions from elder , they can be right. But I disagree with this statement and will explain further this notion in upcoming paragraphs.
First thing that comes in mind that adolescents go through number of scenarios in their daily life, sometimes they comprehend it properly and perform the task accordingly. Consequently, they become instant decision maker as taking advice might confuse them. For example, while schooling a student gets to know about interest in subject that helps learner to choose further stream. Apart from it, however there are chances of mistake but one can get experience for future not make same mistake again.
Another point that comes in my mind is that mostly opinion be given by anyone according to his or her perspective but how much it is beneficial for young one only time can tell. As well as, it can be disinterested for children or young people. Hence, folks would not be able to give 100 percent in work. For example, one wants to establish himself or herself in cooperative sectors due to good working environment, benefits and perk contarary sets in business due to pressure of opinion in family business that leads to unsuccess vivdly.
To conclude, one should listen everyone advice but at end person must do whatever he has interest and his heart wants. As interest and dedication bring success.
- Many different countries have most shops and products as the same Some consider it a positive dvelopment whereas others consider it negative Discuss both sides and give your opinion 95
- Nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers What are the reasons behind it How can we reverse this trend What punishment methods should be used on your opinion 56
- You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help Write a letter to the company and in your letterintroduce yourselfexplain th
- Crime is increasing among teenagers Suggest punishments that can be given 56
- It is better for young to get an advice from old people than young people Do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...do though he gets suggestions from elder , they can be right. But I disagree with ...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...To conclude, one should listen everyone advice but at end person must do whatever he h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93461538462 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55931240858 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0140948153 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166550304758 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493862670614 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037451443607 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839934760463 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021063244748 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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