In present era, obesity has become the main threat. It has various causes although some masses accuse to advertising of fast food therefore this should be stopped while others oppose and believe it doesn't contribute to the overweight problem. I consider it depends on the understanding of people towards the consumption of fatty food. I will discuss both notions in incoming paragraphs.
The main point that strikes in my mind regarding the advertising is that advertisement has so much power to allure the customers towards product. Therefore, presentation of presenting recipe of fast food is so creative that viewers reluctantly and by avoiding the disadvantage, which can lead to gain in weight tempt, themselves to taste the dish and edibles. Another reason, usually it is seen that advertising is done by celebrities hence folks follow them. For instance, plastic content is found in kurukure and huge percentage of fat is there but still individuals eat as it is being introduced by their favourite stars.
Movingfurther with opposite viewpoint that advertise does not contribute in obesity. Apparently, people have their own tastebuds they have become so much habitual of fast food due to number of reasons like hectic schedules, they are so much indulged in their professional life that they have no time to cook in result, they are eating outside and unhealthy oily, easily available food which is making them lethargic and obese. For example, it is surveyed by World health organisation where they found busy schedule does not allow them to have healthy food hence they are being victim of overweight.
In my opinion, it is the responsibility of people to understand that what is good or bad for their health because nothing can rule over a person's mind until he wants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10921501706 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83363200665 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617747440273 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0911148737 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236902506665 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804834975183 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830825029538 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134500830112 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095415921393 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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