Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others diagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by many masses that an enjoyable job is imperative rather than high earning while others deny and consider that nice pay helps to have good life. I feel both are equally required and in further piece of writing I will discuss my expression of believe.
To start with the opinion who support first view that delightful work is better than fine salary. The main point is that satisfying job has its own importance, it provides satisfaction which leads to productivity and makes a person to work with more creativity and enthusiasm. For example, if person does not get employment according to liking then he would not perform precisely as it would be a feel of stress and constraint to him. Thus getting work according to interest is significant.
Explaining about the other view, no doubt choice of work is main but money need can not be ignored. Due to inflation, money is the requirement of every person to meet basic needs and desires so people who give preference to handsome remuneration are right because with limited sources and expensive era one gets confines he will only earn bread and butter but not able to fulfill dream of having luxurious life. To epitome, in this costly era a person gets small chunk of money, he will only feed himself but become able to live high standards of living.
To conclude, these both are priority for a person so from both opinion no one can be neglected. Eventually an individual should approach to only that job which gives contentment and wonderful pay scale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, i feel, no doubt, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82196969697 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59697146494 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0076918526 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243995040793 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805559654438 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607204894236 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140399207931 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473788463626 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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