Education process is a crucial part bin kids live. This is due to its influence on their future life. Good level of education, mean a excellent chance to get dream career when kids grow up. The controversial is, whether, educating children consider more difficult task to day than past, due to the presence of technologies like smart phone and online games that kids spend long time on them, or the opposite is correct. This can be weighed in different aspects. In my vantage, I do not concur with this notion. Admittedly, Some parents believe, teaching children with the presence of smart phone and computer is very hard since they can not manage their time between studying and playing. To me, I see merits of these devices more than their demerits, if parents can control on their kids behaviors. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, one of an important advantage of these smart tools is, they help kids to widen their scope and broaden their base of skills. This is example from my real life, when we were in back home, my son used to play game with his friend from different part of world. Therefore, he try to talk with them in English language. At first, he found difficulty to go that , but, with the time he become a good English speaker. As a result, when we moved to United State, he did not face any problems from different language in school or with his new friends. As we can see how these games help in getting new skills like learning new language.
Second reason springs to my mind, these devices help our kids in their education process. It will facilitate their academic work, hence, it is very easy to access. students can just print key words to get enormous information to help them doing there school works. In addition, today, students is less rely on teachers or parents to learn. they can use Google or You tube to understand any class that they struggle with.
To wrap in, I strongly believe, these devices have a great beneficial if they are used perfectly. Smart tools help student ton increase their knowledge and experiences.
Education process is a crucial part bin kids live. This is due to its influence on their future life. Good level of education, mean a excellent chance to get dream career when kids grow up. The controversial is, whether, educating children consider more difficult task to day than past, due to the presence of technologies like smart phone and online games that kids spend long time on them, or the opposite is correct. This can be weighed in different aspects. In my vantage, I do not concur with this notion. Admittedly, Some parents believe, teaching children with the presence of smart phone and computer is very hard since they can not manage their time between studying and playing. To me, I see merits of these devices more than their demerits, if parents can control on their kids behaviors. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, one of an important advantage of these smart tools is, they help kids to widen their scope and broaden their base of skills. This is example from my real life, when we were in back home, my son used to play game with his friend from different part of world. Therefore, he try to talk with them in English language. At first, he found difficulty to go that , but, with the time he become a good English speaker. As a result, when we moved to United State, he did not face any problems from different language in school or with his new friends. As we can see how these games help in getting new skills like learning new language.
Second reason springs to my mind, these devices help our kids in their education process. It will facilitate their academic work, hence, it is very easy to access. students can just print key words to get enormous information to help them doing there school works. In addition, today, students is less rely on teachers or parents to learn. they can use Google or You tube to understand any class that they struggle with.
To wrap in, I strongly believe, these devices have a great beneficial if they are used perfectly. Smart tools help student ton increase their knowledge and experiences.
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| 2021-08-17 | talelaldabous | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ure life. Good level of education, mean a excellent chance to get dream career wh...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reasons to explain my point of view. To begin with, one of an important advan...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
... different part of world. Therefore, he try to talk with them in English language. ...
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Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...At first, he found difficulty to go that , but, with the time he become a good Eng...
^^
Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uage in school or with his new friends. As we can see how these games help in gett...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new skills like learning new language. Second reason springs to my mind, these ...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...litate their academic work, hence, it is very easy to access. students can just p...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
...ork, hence, it is very easy to access. students can just print key words to get enormou...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
...easy to access. students can just print key words to get enormous information to help the...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to do' or 'do'.
Suggestion: to do; do
...o get enormous information to help them doing there school works. In addition, today,...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...s rely on teachers or parents to learn. they can use Google or You tube to understan...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65782493369 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43548944928 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575596816976 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7824495953 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308047589689 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933176958713 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134384305391 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164221625291 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177805249853 0.0645574589148 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.