Making decision is a crucial thing that all people concern about. The controversial is whether we have to share others in taking this decision or not. This can be weighed in differnt ways. Admittedly, some people believe, no one have a right to share them their choices, since, this is their private life. In my vantage, I concur with this statement, we should take other advices to decide our choices. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view.
To begin with, the important reason why we should ask our relative to to give as their point of view to enable us to make correct decision. Every one in this life expert in a specific field and not familiar with others. Therefore, all persons need help hence they are not experts in all parts of life. Take my real example, ones, when I have decided to buy house, first, I looked for it by on self, because this will be mine, and no one can knows which features that my favor. After a hard work, I can not get a final choice. My friend advise me to ask help from real state, one who is expert in this field. I listen to him, and know, I appreciate to my friend and real state for their help to make this important decision. As a conclusion, we can figure out the benefit from taking other opinion when making a n important decision.
In addition, the other reason spring to my mind. It is very important for young people to share their family like father and mother when making big decision like which major should I take. This is mainly due to the fact that, they do not have enough knowledge and experience to make such a paramount choice. For instance, when I was in high school, I was confusing about which major should I take in a collage. Therefore, I prefer to ask my parents to help me in this situation. My parents have a broad experience from their long life. Furthermore, they know my weakness and strength. So, they explain to me advantages and disadvantages of each field and give me freedom to select my favorite field. as a consequence, I attained to school and graduated with high sores which made me get a good career.
To wrap up, I strongly believe, people should nevr make a big decision without take their relative advices in order to get a perfect result.
Making decision is a crucial thing that all people concern about. The controveral is whether we have to share others in taking this decision or not. This can be weighed in differnt ways. Amidetly, some people believe, no one have a right to share them their choises, since, this is their private life. In my vantage, I concur with this statement, we should take other advices to decide our choices. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view.
To begin with, the important reason why we should ask our relative to to give as their point of view to enable us to make correct decision. Every one in this life expert in a spesific field and not familiar with others. Therefore, all persons need help hence they are not experts in all parts of life. Take my real example, onces, when I have decided to buy house, first, I looked for it by on self, because this will be mine, and no one can knows which features that my favoir. After a hard work, I can not get a final choise. My friend advise me to ask help from real state, one who is expert in this field. I listen to him, and know, I appreciate to my friend and real state for their help to make this important decision. As a conclusion, we can figure out the benefit from taking other opinion when making a n impotant decision.
In addition, the other reason spring to my mind. It is very impotant for young people to share their family like father and mother when making big decision like which major should theyn take. This is mainly due to the fact that, they do not have enough kowledge and experience to make such a paramout chioce. For instane, when I was in high school, I was confusing about which major should I take in acollage. Therefore, I prefered to ask my parents to help me in this situation. My parents have a broad experience from their long life. Furthermore, they know my weakness and strength. So, they explain to me advantages and disadvantages of each field and give me freedom to select my favorate field. as a consequence, I attained to school and gratuated with high sores which made me get a good career.
To wrap up, I strongly believe, people should nevr make a big decision without take their relative advices inorder to get a perfect result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45913461538 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39627533763 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3523410168 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2916666667 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360216574203 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109967871931 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118243115051 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251872824724 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190009925056 0.0645574589148 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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