The friendship is the beautiful thing in our life, and how to main it is the goal of every on.Some believe that keeping old firends are more benefecial that new one, This assay will discuse why the old friends are more effective on our life than the new one.but that dose not mean the new friends dont have any importance
First, we spent long time with old friend from the childhood to right now so that is enough time to understand each other very well so we can share our knowlege help each other , I remember when I was in the six grade I sight up in the bascket ball team .In that time I met my best friend ,we have the same though and prefer the same hoppy, we play in the same team that built a stronge relationship between us from that time till now we are the best friends .We finished the high school togather and even though we got eccepted in different collage ,we are keeping our friendshipto this moment.
In addition we can trust our old friends more than the new friends furthermore,, the old friends become a amember of my family like my sister ,when I face any problem or difficulity in my life she is the first one I going to ask her for help because I know how much she likes me and always ready to help me and give advise , moreover our families also became friends l. For exmaple my mom and my friend's mom became closly friend went to the gym and shoping togather. thats why I prefer the old friend
In conclusion, due to the longe amazing time which is spent it togather ,in addition to the supportnace between us Iam very aoroud of my bold frient and I hope we stay close to each other all the life
The friendship is the beautiful thing in our life, and how to main it is the goal of every on.Some believe that keeping old firends are more benefecial that new one, This assay will discuse why the old friends are more effective on our life than the new one.but that dose not mean the new friends dont have any importance
First, we spent long time with old friend from the childhood to right now so that is enough time to understand each other very well so we can share our knowlege help each other , I remember when I was in the six grade I sight up in the bascket ball team .In that time I met my best friend ,we have the same though and prefer the same hoppy, we play in the same team that built a stronge relationship between us from that time till now we are the best friends .We finished the high school togather and even though we got eccepted in different collage ,we are keeping our friendshipto this moment.
In addition we can trust our old friends more than the new friends furthermore,, the old friends become a amember of my family like my sister ,when I face any problem or difficulity in my life she is the first one I going to ask her for help because I know how much she likes me and always ready to help me and give advise , moreover our families also became friends l. For exmaple my mom and my friend's mom became closly friend went to the gym and shoping togather. thats why I prefer the old friend
In conclusion, due to the longe amazing time which is spent it togather ,in addition to the supportnace between us Iam very aoroud of my bold frient and I hope we stay close to each other all the life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23870967742 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21624360128 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.1344086022 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 316.841048477 48.9658058833 647% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.5 100.406767564 327% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.5 20.6045352989 376% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.25 5.45110844103 371% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393804551534 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190712325661 0.076458572812 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142088566779 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28873283304 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.319746658583 0.0645574589148 495% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 11.7677419355 317% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 58.1214874552 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 10.1575268817 293% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.5 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 10.002688172 520% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.0537634409 326% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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