The reading and lecture about the working four days a week instead of five days a week. The author beileives that four days work a week is good option, The lecturer casts doubts on the claim made in the article .He thinks that full time work is better
First, the author states that four days work reduce the time that employee spend at work so they become more relaxe and comftable ,then the workers will do their best. The lecturer argue that . He sayes working for four hours will inforce the workers to finish their workn in shorter time, this considered stressful thing lead them to do misstakes,
secondly, the writer claims that four days working is a acompany profite due to the reduce in the payment. Also this give a apportunity to another worker to get jobs. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests that the company will spend alot of money for training and providing computers for new employees and this is not worth it.in addition the employees want to get medical services that can not be given to part time worker.
Finaly, the author states that when the employees work less hour weekly so they can save extra time to spend it with their families. The lecturer in the other hand, notes that shotened work week will reduce the quality of employees,s life styles so they need extra jobs to provide their family demands.
The reading and lecture about the working four days a week instead of five days a week. The author beileives that four days work a week is good option, The lecturer casts doubts on the claim made in the article .He thinks that full time work is better
First, the author states that four days work reduce the time that employee spend at work so they become more relaxe and comftable ,then the workers will do their best. The lecturer argue that . He sayes working for four hours will inforce the workers to finish their workn in shorter time, this considered stressful thing lead them to do misstakes,
secondly, the writer claims that four days working is a acompany profite due to the reduce in the payment. Also this give a apportunity to another worker to get jobs. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests that the company will spend alot of money for training and providing computers for new employees and this is not worth it.in addition the employees want to get medical services that can not be given to part time worker.
Finaly, the author states that when the employees work less hour weekly so they can save extra time to spend it with their families. The lecturer in the other hand, notes that shotened work week will reduce the quality of employees,s life styles so they need extra jobs to provide their family demands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12425606014 2.5805825403 82% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552742616034 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.759673899 49.2860985944 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548926690996 0.272083759551 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231507834903 0.0996497079465 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.248725833056 0.0662205650399 376% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38607880304 0.162205337803 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.34658562655 0.0443174109184 782% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.