The diagram detailed elucidates the ingredients that go into a factory-made fish pie and the numerous steps in its production.
Looking for an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the pie consists of salmon, peas, sauce, and potatoes. It also noticed that there are 10 stages in its manufacture, from delivery to dispatch. Another interesting point is that the potato goes through its own six-step preparation process before it can be added to the pie.
To begin with, potatoes are the first ingredient to be prepared on the manufacturing line. They are delivered to the factory up to one month before the process begins and they must be cleaned, peeled, and sliced. The sliced potatoes are boiled then chilled and stored.
When fresh salmon arrives at the factory, lemon juice and salt are added and the fish is cooked in the steam oven within 12 hours of delivery. Subsequently, factory workers remove the skin and bones, and the fish is inspected. Following that, prepared sauce, peas, and potatoes are added. The resulting fish pies are wrapped, frozen then stored or dispatched.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08241758242 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68593661963 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6365079361 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094165813242 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360708872527 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414069109538 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059795583198 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338595896932 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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