Studies have suggested that children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things.
What are the reasons and what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?
Nowadays, it is widely acknowledged that children spend more time watching television and less time participating in active or creative activities. This phenomenon can be ascribed to a number of factors and some feasible measures should be implemented.
The increase in the amount of time spent on watching television can be attributed to a wealth of causes. First, lack of parental supervision can be to blame for this issue. Working parents who usually have a hectic schedule may have little time to care for their families. Therefore, they have to leave their children at home and watch TV freely. Second, the heavy school workload restraints students from taking part in active and creative tasks. Schools have the tendency to put a heavy emphasis on academic subjects such as Maths and Physics, which marginalizes the importance of non-academic disciplines. Therefore, students may not have the opportunities to enjoy creative and active activities.
Some viable methods can be adopted to put a stop to this trend. On the school level, teachers should include more non-academic courses in the curriculum and introduce more extra-curriculum activities. For instance, a trip to a rural with various art activities such as singing or drawing would not only encourage students to be more active and energetic but also cultivate their creativity. On the parental level, parents should interact with children more often despite their tight schedules. By setting aside some time in the evening or on the weekend, parents could join them with recreational and art activities.
In conclusion, heavy school curriculum and absence of parental care are the driving causes of excessive television watching and lack of active and creative tasks. Schools and parents should shoulder the responsibilities to address this issue effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40418118467 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00424414587 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3409730341 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32569638606 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107085150874 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990113230008 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21979409184 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107198532015 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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