'The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.”
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence would be needed in order to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
While it is true that the television station need to attract more viewers and losing the advertising revenues but this memorandum doesn't make cogent case for restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level .It is easy to understand that business needs to get back on stage but this argument is rife with holes and assumptions and thus ,not strong enough to lead the idea of going back to weather and local case.
Firstly , in which it is mentioned that televison station changed the time lines between the national news and local news ,throughout this time they are receiving the 'most of complaints' in which viewers wants to see more weather and local news.It is not clearly mentioned that these complaints are coming from what time , their is lack of information .The television set changes the casting over the year and may be these comaplints are only getting in the last two months only or its started in early months only.Also there is no definite mentioned that what viewers are concerned with , is they want more weather news or they want see more local news .There is also lack of data that is not able to mentioned that how much complaints are this , like number of complaints to total number of receiving and what kind of customer is it , also no authenticity mentioned for the recieved compalints and data, therefore on the basics of there weak assumptions it is not so right to come up with the decision on coverage of news.
Secondly, in memo it is concerned with the business of having lossing the adversting contracts at late night show , this statement which is mentioned is no where relation that it is due to increased time to national news .there are multiple flaws in this dialogue. For example it is highly possibe that local business that used to advertise at late night show , now wants it at day time for more attention to viewers , secondly on that may be they are getting the same services at low price in market .It is also possible that they no longer wants advertisment for their product , as it maybe going well .Therefore , deciding the idea of impact of advertisement business and forecasting the news is indepedent and based on holes assumptions.
At the end , decreasing the time span on basis of mentioned reasons are not perfectly anaylzed and also information is also flawed with assumptions.For having more accurate reason , they may have survey conduct to viewers what they really want to see as well as a feedback form to the other business party as to see what is the primary reason for losing it .Hence , the decision of changing the time slots for news is depends on less accurate data and can be summarized with better reasoning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, kind of, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72553191489 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56490071353 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 23.0359550562 408% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 255.719690286 60.3974514979 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 444.2 118.986275619 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.0 23.4991977007 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 5.21951772744 613% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308360442489 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181993530584 0.0831039109588 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062327361755 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192453134439 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551467112358 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.8 14.1392134831 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.47 48.8420337079 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 12.1743820225 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.38706741573 134% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 11.2143820225 353% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.