Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
We all agree with one fact that friendship is an amazing bond and is a relation for lifetime to cherish and to be maintained. While becoming friends with someone, we do not think actually much about similarity or differences. But, mostly we can say that people with similar values and choices become great friends together as they understand each other well.
I agree with both the views. We will discuss both in this essay.
First of all, when we do friendship with someone; we don't go much deep initially. It is all about our experiences with them and the situations and how they help us in overcoming from it.
For example, if before an exam; you are nervous and you have negative thoughts coming into your mind and your friend is also feeling the same anxiety, then it will be difficult for both later. Instead, if you have a friend who is completely opposite to this and who motivates you and encourage, then this can be beneficial in many ways. So as i said, it all depends upon circumstances.
On the other hand, sharing same thoughts with friends will make people to have a feeling that there is always someone to support them. For example, if a choice is to be made in the favour of society, like if majority of the believers are in favour of becoming 'Vegan', this will have a great positive impact overall.
Also, different thoughts from friends could increase the diversity of daily life.A person learns many ideas and experiences from the opposite person that can improve life many ways.
In conclusion, there is no specific criteria to define the friendships based upon the similarity or differences. Both are equally important and lead to a friendship that values a diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74915254237 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59133419831 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8606948296 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243670497022 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791199193104 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787926560217 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102959252482 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667891548236 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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