Many organisations and companies ask their staff to wear a uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? What kind of jobs should have a work uniform?
It is often argued that wearing a uniform is necessary to present the identity of job.This essay will address the perspective of advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform and suggest the list of professions who wear it.
One of the advantage is that it is effective in terms of identifying a person's real work.One can easily say from the uniform about an occupation of a person.For example,if an individual is hesitate to ask,the proper clothes might be easy to find out the employees due to the symbol of their occupation.Also,an individual can come out as a complete different personality if he/she wearing a uniform.Like in aviation industry or hotel industry,it is a must to wear a uniform.It will not only separate you from a crowd but gives certain kind of confidence.This is one of the advantages.People associated with fields like aviation,hotel,police,navy,design industry,medical,pharma etc.have to wear compulsory uniform.
I believe there is no disadvantage involved in wearing a uniform.Some suitable jobs might be required to wear it while staff is working.For example,in beauty parlours;staff has to wear a uniform.They are involved in a various activities so there are most chances that uniform will get dirty.For example,in the process like hair colour or hair dye,the colour tubes might affect their original dress with the colours which they use.Thus,some skilled job should have a work uniform to prevent the original dress to get dirty. A chef has to wear a white uniform compulsory while cooking dishes in the hotel industry.
In conclusion,plenty of companies order their workers to wear a particular clothing during work. Some technical occupations must need it irrespective of advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41544117647 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89097576013 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 243.644150807 49.4020404114 493% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.5 106.682146367 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.3333333333 20.7667163134 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340722029373 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158632850424 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712813443227 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201561075377 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488161446268 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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