You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
• Explain where your apartment is
• Describe the room
• What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Smith from Canada, Pursuing 3rd year management degree at a University.I am writing this to tell you about a vacant room in my apartment. I need your help to offer it on rent to a university student.
I live in Mayflower apartment near Tracheon Park.The apartment is in the central location of Canada.There is a bus station nearby,around 1km from the building.Also,it takes about only 5-7 minutes of walk to reach metro station.There are several small grocery stores around where anyone will get variety of daily needs.The building is equiped with gym as well.
The vacant room has attached bathroom and facilitated with washing machine,a king size bed,iron table and an air-conditioner.The internet and the washing area is common for all the inmates.
I would like to offer a room to the person who can speak English and German preferably.Also,has to be vegetarian and should keep the room up to date.Good to have someone who doesn't drink as well.
Please help me with the contact detail of any such person who is in need of a room.
Yours sincerely,
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Smith from Canada, Pursuing 3rd yea...
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...r it on rent to a university student. I live in Mayflower apartment near Trache...
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...is in need of a room. Yours sincerely, Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13388623137 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.172149516 44.8134815571 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201973649087 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967743684374 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472196208419 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882506355937 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535535579888 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.