Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times even on holidays Does this development have more disadvantages than advantages

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more disadvantages than advantages?

Technology is improving the way of communication and many organizations want to take an advantage of it to fill the gap of connectivity between employees.It can have impacts in both ways,particularly for some it can be benificial.This development has both advantages and disadvantages
Firstly,people who are involved in a professional fields like medical or nursing should always be ready to attend an emergency calls to save a patient's life regardless of holidays.In this case,the main advantage is it helps in saving lives of many.Another advantage of employees working on holidays is they are getting paid for whatever amount of work has been done on an hourly basis.Particularly,corporate companies give such benefits and after over time,an employee is entitled to take leaves also.Furthermore,people associated with an IT field can work from anywhere and solve queries of the clients even during holidays.They do not need to go to the office for client meetings or any other correspondence.
On the other side,personal life of an employee gets affected as the employee has to dedicate more time to his job.For very urgent projects or say deadlines,it becomes a compulsion to solve the queries of clients where an employee can not deny even if during holidays.This at the end results in a stressful life and a frustration with a company.In most of the cases,employees prefer to change their job due to the work pressure they handle during leave.This has an adverse impact on work-life balance in overall.
In conclusion,ultimately a company should decide a middle way to overcome this situation in a way that work-life balance does not get suffer and an employee can enjoy holidays also.This can be the only approach which can be helpful to both.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, as to, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20141342756 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75005733161 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 20.2975951904 463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 313.171234666 49.4020404114 634% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 490.666666667 106.682146367 460% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.3333333333 20.7667163134 454% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148845148699 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988062721585 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345266723911 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989936312362 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415182706521 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.2 13.0946893788 383% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -32.39 50.2224549098 -64% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.1 11.3001002004 364% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.26 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 65.0 9.78957915832 664% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 10.1190380762 391% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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