Something in the airport delayed you and you missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport's customer service department.
* what delayed you?
* how missing this flight affected you?
* what would you like to do about this issue?
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Rajesh Menon and I am a frequent traveler from Bangalore domestic airport.I am writing this letter to express my disappointment and the difficulties I went thorugh.I missed my flight last week from Bangalore to Mumbai.
As this is a holiday season,so there is a huge air traffic and many bookings.Considering the circumstances,I was sure that there will be an arrangement done by airport authorities to overcome this.I reached the airport four hours before my scheduled departure.When I entered inside after security check,I found that only two security terminals were operational.Also,there was a lack of tags to be applied on the luggage.It took some time for the staff to arrange the same.This caused much delay in the further process.
Due to the airport's mismanagement,I was unable to spend my holiday with the family.To cope up the holiday traffic,I would urge you to take the prompt action. I would also suggest to recruit more staff and onboard automated screening technology to make the process faster.
I am hoping for the favourable action from your side.
Yours Faithfully,
Rajesh Menon
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...tion from your side. Yours Faithfully, Rajesh Menon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34881883807 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686813186813 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.915035579 44.8134815571 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 76.5299724578 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 16.8248392259 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17231611658 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645901434092 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041951882087 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811272538991 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358988874339 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 8.37731958763 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 70.7449484536 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 8.62886597938 353% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.