You are going on a month training program to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organizer.
Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter:
• express your interest in the role
• request more information about it -
• explain what experience you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to say I am thankful and equally excited for a month-long training program to the UK.We have come to know that you want one of us participants to be social events' organizer. I am writing this letter to tell you that I am really interested in this role.It will be my pleasure to work as a volunteer.
I need some information about the same.Can you please let me know what kind of program is it?What will be the duration and venue for this social event?I would really appreciate if you could give me details about the roles and responsibilities.Moreover,I am quite interested to know about the theme of an event.
I have organised several events and participated as well in such programs during my college courses.I have earned certificates and lot of appreciation from our team members and some seniors.I voluntered for a blood donation camp and encouraged people to take part in such a noble cause.
Looking forward to hear from you as per your convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to say I am thankful and eq...
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Suggestion: We
...a month-long training program to the UK.We have come to know that you want one of ...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...ant one of us participants to be social events organizer. I am writing this letter to ...
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Suggestion: It
...hat I am really interested in this role.It will be my pleasure to work as a volunt...
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Suggestion: Can
... I need some information about the same.Can you please let me know what kind of pro...
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Suggestion: What
... let me know what kind of program is it?What will be the duration and venue for this...
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...uration and venue for this social event?I would really appreciate if you could gi...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...ls about the roles and responsibilities.Moreover,I am quite interested to know about the...
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... the roles and responsibilities.Moreover,I am quite interested to know about the t...
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Suggestion: I
...such programs during my college courses.I have earned certificates and lot of app...
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Suggestion: I
... from our team members and some seniors.I voluntered for a blood donation camp an...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... from our team members and some seniors.I voluntered for a blood donation camp an...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...n such a noble cause. Looking forward to hear from you as per your convenience. Your...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per your convenience. Yours faithfully, Rakesh Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79213483146 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17071504709 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.518777687 44.8134815571 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305884255653 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136515553024 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768514724794 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154543777613 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105446460426 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.