You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events organiser Write a letter to the Training Organiser In your letter expressing your interest in the role re

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writting this to let you know that I will be comming to UK for a month training programme. Recently, I have come across the news that one of the head is looking for someone to host social events and I am glad that I would love to be the one.

Let me explain you more in detail. I am extremely happy to be part of such events as I would love to organise these kind of events. I am thinking of holding a game event where everyone from different countries can engage themselves. It will be a good team bonding exercise as well.

Moreover, I would like to ask more information regarding new students and whether there is a hall or game area available in the campus or not. So that I can plan my games according to that. Also if someone from my course can help me with the planning, I will be even more happy.

When I was in my high school, I used to organise such kind of events every year. I have experience in organising both indoor as well as outdoor game events.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours Faithfully,

Jay

Votes
Average: 5.6 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...such events as I would love to organise these kind of events. I am thinking of holding a g...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me area available in the campus or not. So that I can plan my games according to that. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... I can plan my games according to that. Also if someone from my course can help me w...
^^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ve experience in organising both indoor as well as outdoor game events. Thank you for y...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, kind of, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35175879397 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52538437135 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4951873332 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6153846154 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245323256087 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781584568407 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524347220694 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124717500917 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588418300979 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...such events as I would love to organise these kind of events. I am thinking of holding a g...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me area available in the campus or not. So that I can plan my games according to that. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... I can plan my games according to that. Also if someone from my course can help me w...
^^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ve experience in organising both indoor as well as outdoor game events. Thank you for y...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, kind of, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35175879397 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52538437135 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4951873332 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6153846154 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245323256087 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781584568407 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524347220694 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124717500917 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588418300979 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.