Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Jay Thomas and I had booked a trip to Niagra Falls on last weekend. I am writing this to let you know that I am extremely unsatisfied with your service.
Let me explain you more in detail. First of all, as you had mention that our tour will start at sharp 9 o’ clock, but this was not the case. It got delayed and we commenced our journey after 11.30. Due to this delay, we lost our first activity.
Moreover, after reaching there, there was no arrangement for food. Luckily we had brought some food packages from home so that was a relief. Sadly, your tour guide was very rude. He did not explain anything in detail and when we asked him anything, he was not able to explain thoroughly. I am deeply annoyed because we have paid huge amount for this vacation, but in return we had to face lots of issues.
Meanwhile, from next time make sure that your tour is well managed and everything runs smoothly. For me, it is difficult to give suggestion about your travelling company due to bad experience.
I hope you can understand my situation.
Yours faithfully,
Rachel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erstand my situation. Yours faithfully, Rachel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45305931441 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5270873756 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158757048154 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534882522453 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435157449185 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877772673081 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039287508646 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.