Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am mother of Jay who is in second grade in your school. I am writing this to let you know that he is learning French as a second language and he is finding hard to learn that. Actually, he is in need of some extra classes to improve his level.
To begin with, the reason behind his poor performance is that at home neither me nor my husband knows this language at all. So whenever he has any doubts or issues, we are not able to solve it. Moreover, we have tried some other methods like purchasing storybooks in French, but it is not helping him.
Furthermore, can you please explain about your teaching methods and experiences? It would be wonderful if we know that, so we can guide him in that way. Maybe your way of learning would be easy to adjust.
In the end, I would like to propose you some possible schedule for class as I am also a working women. Please make sure that he has classes on every Tuesday and Thursday after 4 P.M. Also, no class should be there on weekends as he would love to only play on that days.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Rachel
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am mother of Jay who is in second grad...
^^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...hedule for class as I am also a working women. Please make sure that he has classes o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33492822967 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3761653871 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4744094142 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6923076923 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248196220342 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944519578774 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613811274765 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131040657467 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625931676165 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am mother of Jay who is in second grad...
^^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...hedule for class as I am also a working women. Please make sure that he has classes o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33492822967 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3761653871 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4744094142 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6923076923 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248196220342 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944519578774 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613811274765 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131040657467 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625931676165 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.