Dear Rachel,
I hope everything is great on your end. I am writing this to express my gratitude for what you have done to me.
Two days back I went to a cafe with my friend and I had one big box with me. Suddenly out of no where heavy thunderstorm started and all of us became anxious. In that chaotic atmosphere we left cafe but unfortunately I forgot to take that parcel with me.
Most importantly, that box is more than money for me as there was ancient tea set which was owned by my grandmother. She passed away last week and due to my hectic work schedule I was unable to participate in her funeral ceremony.
Undoubtedly, that tea set was the only thing that i can take with me in her remembrance and cherish all the wonderful memories of her and the beautiful time that we have spent together.
Once again I feel so humble for your noble gesture.
Thank you,
Monali.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ad one big box with me. Suddenly out of no where heavy thunderstorm started and al...
^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y, that tea set was the only thing that i can take with me in her remembrance and...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35757575758 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53675280313 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678787878788 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2018518122 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131331683246 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643983112421 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094900383056 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554593690765 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569402907528 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ad one big box with me. Suddenly out of no where heavy thunderstorm started and al...
^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y, that tea set was the only thing that i can take with me in her remembrance and...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35757575758 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53675280313 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678787878788 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2018518122 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131331683246 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643983112421 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094900383056 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554593690765 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569402907528 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.