Dear Jay,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. I have just received photographs from my trip to Spain last month. I must admit that they are wonderful as well as memorable. Thank you for the beautiful photographs.
Actually I am writing this to thank you for inviting me to your home during my vacation over there. You are such a great host. Even if your house is small, you have make sure that I should be comfortable. Thank you for taking best care of me.
Sadly, after my trip got ended, I fall sick. May be due to sudden change in weather or due to my hectic schedule, I was unable to get up from my bed for almost 15 days. This is the reason why I could not write this letter before.
Furthermore, why donot you guys come over here and spent some time with me? It will be great reunion. Also, I am having my graduation day in upcoming weekend and I am thinking of throwing a party for some close friends and family members. I will be much more happy if you guys can join me. Let me know if its possible.
Once again thanking you for such lovely photographs.
Yours friendly,
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...raphs from my trip to Spain last month. I must admit that they are wonderful as w...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29868031988 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658653846154 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0765920528 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.1111111111 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5555555556 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341657042812 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106040988735 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667881854206 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185239262244 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084858903901 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...raphs from my trip to Spain last month. I must admit that they are wonderful as w...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29868031988 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658653846154 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0765920528 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.1111111111 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5555555556 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341657042812 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106040988735 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667881854206 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185239262244 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084858903901 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.