Dear Rachel,
I have received your letter two days before. I am utterly happy to know that your son Ryan will be coming to my hometown during his christmas vacation and you have asked that if I can accommodate him in my house.
First of all, I feel extremely sorry that currently I am unable to adjust your son in my home. Due to ongoing renovations, we have very limited space available. On top of that, whatever rooms that we have are filled with lots of luggage and boxes. Unfortunately, the renovation project was about to get finished in the end of this month but due to some labor issues it is getting delayed.
But don't be sad. There is one unoccupied room in my friend's house who lives nearby me. She is very generous and helpful as well. So your son can stay over there during his vacation. I will make sure to make most out of his holidays once he will come here.
I can't wait to see him here.
Your friend,
Monali.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yan will be coming to my hometown during his christmas vacation and you have aske...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...op of that, whatever rooms that we have are filled with lots of luggage and boxes. ...
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Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...abor issues it is getting delayed. But dont be sad. There is one unoccupied room in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...is holidays once he will come here. I cant wait to see him here. Your friend, Mo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, i feel, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33142857143 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32490684474 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7523486327 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3076923077 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297905362811 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10477960117 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119444697236 0.0603063233224 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14072153943 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583554234385 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.