In many countries ,people are having health issue.this is due to their unhealthy living.
What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle?
What can be done to solve this problem?
After an innovation and modernisation,life has become so easy.People have beome more tech savy which was just a dream, few years ago.Thanks to the advancement and latest technology.Though,in one way this is a good sign of progress but as its negative impact,people have started developing many health issues due to their dependency on it.
This is not related to any particular country but in many countries young generation have started developing many health issues.We will discuss the reasons and its possible solution.
First,main reason is sedentary lifestyle of today's generation.In this competitive world,they just flat-out for long working hours to achieve success in their career.Due to this,they are not able to manage time between home and office.They start eating unhealthy items,packed food especially.
These items are readily available in the market.Also,manufacturer's have understood the demand of such kind of food which is full of preservatives but sold at a faster rate.
Long working hours or say target achievement does not allow people to do exercises on a regular basis.They get tired after much work pressure and at the end do not feel to exercise or meditate to keep their body fit.During weekends,most of the people order food like pizza,pasta,noodles,burgers and much more instead of preparing the same at home.
To overcome this problem,many steps can be taken.Employees can discuss about these problems with management and can suggest corrective measures.Offices should think about operating gym after working hours and boost employees for the same.On the other hand,we as an individual should take out time during weekends for ourselves.
In Conclusion,it is every person's own responsibility to take care of their health, and keep away life threatening diseases like BP,cholesterol,heart attack.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56630824373 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74720855067 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652329749104 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0479059088 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 221.857142857 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.8571428571 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275255723007 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10942060988 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659946042614 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10942060988 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659946042614 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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