Dear Ms Smith,
I am writing to apologize for missing the daily meeting at work. I have heard that there was discussion of launching a new product. I hope my absence does not cause any problems but, I believe, I need to elaborate on this situation.
You might hear about the collapse of one part of the building in the resident area. The reason for this destruction was the egregious mistakes of constructions who did not care about strengthen the rotten roof. The result of this was flooding my apartment and ruin all my property. I should have called you but I clean forgot while being under the pressure from this situation.
I do apologize for any inconvenience caused by my absence. To make up for it, I would like to do my best. For instance, I might prepare the slides for the next presentation since I missed the last one, or I might design a prototype of a new packing for a new product.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Helen Pr.
- Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to a higher position What s your opinion 91
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as South pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 89
- The natural resources such as oil forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate What problems does it cause How can we solve these problems 63
- Air travel is responsible for a lot of pollution in the environment Some people think that prices of air plane tickets the should be increased in order to reduce Air Traffic Do you agree or disagree 89
- Leaders of any kind are younger today than in the past What are the reasons for that Is it a positive or negative development 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57714285714 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74812589202 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6969571854 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.75 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212851883889 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757852830573 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842008092731 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144507927801 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487844000384 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.