The older you get life becomes more difficult, give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
Societies in today’s world play a crucial role for bringing up people together and celebrating various occasions.Some masses opine that these groups are responsible for all the Immoral activities.This essay will attempt to discuss the reasons for the aforementioned view and who should be blamed for these activities.
To commence with, A Society mostly consists of like minded people or may be mankind from the same religion or caste, this particular section wants to dominate the other groups by going against the law.The greed to become the elite group in their places makes them to create riots consequently, helps them to surpass people from different cultures/religions.A recent Incident between Muslims and hindus is a great example to discuss where individuals from both groups involved in anti-social activities to gain upper hand over others.
Furthermore, Politicians and other affluent individuals are the ones that are responsible for making people to involve in the atrocity.They try to support clan that belongs to their caste or religion.In addition, they show superiority over other groups by their actions or activities which ultimately uproots the fundamental law of “ Right to Equality”, as a result, humans from various sections chooses an antisocial path to protest against them.For instance, a survey conducted by “The Hindu” a popular newspaper organization suggests that the people who fight against the landlords by breaking Law and order in Warangal were once humiliated by them on caste basis.
In a nutshell, people’s greed of making their own group elite,that may be a religion,caste or culture in a particular area is responsible for activities contrary to social activities.The leaders and individuals with power plays a crucial role in developing this mindset in people.
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- Living in large cities today poses many problems for people What are these problems Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns 73
- some people think that society should be blamed for anti social activities what are the causes for these activities who is responsible for them 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50177935943 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16092773415 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.721031604 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 386.5 106.682146367 362% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.25 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798223667009 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505627189136 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024447819767 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505627189136 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024447819767 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 50.2224549098 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.33 8.58950901804 144% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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