It is true that home education in which many parents begin teaching their children themselves at home has become commonplace worldwide. While this method of education tends to bring some advantages, I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
On one hand, there are some main reasons that lead to a considerable increase in the number of home-educated children. The first objection is that this mean of education provides opportunities for parents to take great care of their youngsters. When students take lessons at their own houses, parents can easily identify their children’s weaknesses and then prevent them from having difficulties in studying as one-to-one lessons allow much faster progress. For instance, homeschooling students can ask their parents or tutors when there are some misunderstandings in the lessons or when they face a tough problem. The second reason is that home-based education is more convenient for families who live in distant areas with poor means of transportation because they are offered lessons directly at home instead of going to school.
On the other hand, I believe that home education might bring more negative effects than positive ones. The first thing is that private lessons are usually costly as it requires one tutor for a particular field and there are often more than ten subjects which students have to learn. As a result, a family who has a meager budget cannot afford this way of education. Another reason why parents should not apply this way of teaching is that children cannot receive enough social experiences which they can be provided at school. If students just learn things in theory but not practical ones, they will lack social skills and cannot get on well with the other people. For example, almost homeschooling students tend to be shy and reserved as they might lose the abilities to solve realistic problems. Therefore, in my view, it is more advantageous to send children to school when they are old enough.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there will be more drawbacks than benefits of homeschooling education
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88847518405 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.80015425 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07960151966 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281052063694 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306666112826 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446186079605 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321565687284 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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