The pictures below show the differences in the layout of a conference Centre between its present and its future plan summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps show the information about the distinguishable setup of present and future conference Centre plan.
Regarding the first map, people can enter the reception dask by door. Toilet and Cafe is located in the left side and right side of the reception, that parts is on the southern. There are two meeting rooms on the Western side and big hall is towards the west side. Then the area of car park is direct connected with main road and garden is completely near with the car park.
Following the future map, the present hall will converted into a cafe and kitchen. The cafe will replaced by fitness centre. The meeting area will not changed in the future, but room will extended. The carpark location will smaller compare than present and even garden will big so, people will spend good time with flowers and plants. The reception and the toilet will remains on the south side of conference centre.
Overall, the upcoming formation of conference Centre will also big as well as many areas than present. There will also involve a lot of locations into the future layout of a conference centre.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the car park. Following the future map, the present hall will converted into a c...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'convert'
Suggestion: convert
... the future map, the present hall will converted into a cafe and kitchen. The cafe will ...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'replace'
Suggestion: replace
... into a cafe and kitchen. The cafe will replaced by fitness centre. The meeting area wi...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cafe and kitchen. The cafe will replaced by fitness centre. The meeting area will...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...tness centre. The meeting area will not changed in the future, but room will extended. ...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'extend'
Suggestion: extend
...ot changed in the future, but room will extended. The carpark location will smaller comp...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in the future, but room will extended. The carpark location will smaller compare t...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pend good time with flowers and plants. The reception and the toilet will remains o...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...ants. The reception and the toilet will remains on the south side of conference centre....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.765625 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33225770409 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5376471495 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.25 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113546131973 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508127395742 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732117885926 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110475016974 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968351160761 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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