There is a drastic change in each and every field due to rapid advancement Technology and robot is a artificial electronic item and it does provided many requirement for people. But other group of people inclied to voice date robots can be bad perks on society. Prior my viewpoint gives both the opinion would be analysed and I will discuss it with details and examples.
To comment with, some electronic gadget play a vital role in each and every department such as offices, business, schools and so on. I do not discuss on all things but I talking about one thing, it is electronic robots. First and foremost, electronic robots is very important in restaurant which can be work of waiter. Another advantage is it is an inevitable in automobile sector and not only robots save our precious time but save a lot of money such as it is replaced by labour work. For instance, washing machine is one type of robot which can utility in household and it can make work very easy for human.
To contrary, I talking about another side of robot different types of parts is very expensive and it can be very difficult for maintain according to time. If robots comes into every field, so unemployment can be increase and government will be another arrangement for labour work. Roberts do not carry emotions to understand the difference between right and wrong. The role of the robot in human life is questionable.
To conclude, and offer my position I support former view because automatic machine can be work from 24 hours in it can be make a large quantity of products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...pid advancement Technology and robot is a artificial electronic item and it does ...
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun requirement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many requirements'.
Suggestion: many requirements
...al electronic item and it does provided many requirement for people. But other group of people i...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch and every department such as offices, business, schools and so on. I do not di...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... on. I do not discuss on all things but I talking about one thing, it is electron...
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Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich can utility in household and it can make work very easy for human. To cont...
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Line 2, column 605, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hold and it can make work very easy for human. To contrary, I talking about ano...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ork very easy for human. To contrary, I talking about another side of robot dif...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...another side of robot different types of parts is very expensive and it can be ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68363636364 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63924857826 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5144050362 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129778435085 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530614320973 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379046024804 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790443384608 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391809040796 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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