With the development of social media more and more youngsters are being allowed on supervised access to the internet in order to meet and checked with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situation. What solutions can u suggest to deal with this problem?
In this development Era, Most of the teenagers are attracted towards online sites and social media, to make new friends and relations. However excessive use of this activity could be lead to the hazardous situations. In this essay I will enlist reasons for such a thing to happen along with suggesting remedies to mitigate the discussed problem.
There are numerous parameters because of which adloscents are attracted towards online sites and consequently faces danger. First of all, Easy communication despite of location is the main reason for addiction. Exposures to unknown person leads to hazardous situations. For instance we can take Facebook, how multicultural personalities aroung the world gets connected without knowing or seeing each other. Second of all, Due to bad environment in family, youth move to social site to divert there mind. Because of that, one can face mental and health issue like depression, anxiety and loneliness.
Fortunately, means are available to curtail this problem. Firstly, Goverment should raise awareness of frauds among youngsters. And also should impose some safety guidelines to the application developer company due to which a person cannot get exposed to any unknown. To illustrate, Recently a changed made by developers in Facebook app as previously it is an open platform but now we can only send request to known persons. Secondly, Parents have to take initiative and apply a lock in their phone along with social sites. While doing so, youth will not have any exposures to any unknown things which ultimately results in a better health.
To sum up, I believe Easy exposure to an unknown person and family conditions are the primary causes of adoloscents attraction towards social site and internet. If solutions like awareness campaign about change done by developer and also a front step by parents for their childers are implemented appropriately, In my opinion the issue at hand can be easily death with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24761904762 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8240303455 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9335339933 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206971161813 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554645999656 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404700577318 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127389508996 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421611232244 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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