Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many people argue that the responsibility of preserving the environment belongs to the government or each person. From my point of view, it will be more beneficial if both the government and ordinary citizens take part in environmental conservation.
On the one hand, the government plays a pivotal role in alleviating environmental problems for several reasons. Firstly, some environmental problems are the direct result of energy production and consumption that can be related with legislation. For example, there are some laws requiring factories move to sparsely populated areas to protect people from poisonous fumes, which factories frequently discharge into the atmosphere. Secondly, some environmental issues are too big for individuals to deal with such as global warming, violent storms. It spends a lot of money researching special equipment and a large number of experienced scientists work together. Only governments can have sufficient funds anh resources to invest in this.
On the other hand, I believe that everybody also needs to take responsibility for environmental preservation. Individuals can make a huge difference with simple changes in lifestyle such as recycling more, buying energy-efficient household items or planting trees for the garden. I think that if both state officials and people do not cooperate, environmental issues will never be efficiently tackled. This is because regardless of the government’s policies, farmers continue to burn forest for their own purposes, the problem of climate change will never be successfully mitigated.
In conclusion, due to the large amount of work involved, therefore, I think that the efforts of both the government and ordinary citizens will result in the most efficient way to preserve the damage done to the planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...money researching special equipment and a large number of experienced scientists work together. O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59124087591 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.256693497 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0805748055 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257476497171 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859544896869 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553618892493 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148014915772 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656197813841 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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