The chart illustrates how waste paper is recycled.
It can be seen from the chart, there are six main phases involved in the process, beginning with the collection of waste paper and ending with making usable paper.
At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected from either public paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper or directly from businesses. Next, the waste paper is sorted by hand. By evaluating and then depending on its grade, the unsuitable paper is removed from the process and suitable one is passed to the transportation stage. During this stage, paper is delivered to paper mill.
At paper mill, paper is cleaned, pulped and removed of other contaminant material such as staples… but there are still inks and glues need to be eliminated on it so de-inking is the following stage. Finally, usable paper is produced by a machine manufacture to complete the process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, so, still, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96202531646 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56159500064 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0961955356 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381442888769 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192553773637 0.0766984524023 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768607846577 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251508054099 0.12726935374 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679129384873 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.