In some countries increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food .It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Thesedays, eating fastfood is a common trend among people .There is currently contentious argument over eating extravagant fastfood causes deleterious effect for health.Subsequently it is therefor necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food .But some people believe that limited consumption of fastfood do not causes harm for health and for encouraging with expanding fastfood businesses it is not necessary to impose tax on fastfood by governments .i completely agree with the opinion of the question and i support my point of view with examples.
firstly, eating extra fastfood causes obesity.The main reason for believing this is that all types of fastfood consist of extra fat,callories and artificial flavours.for example, most of the people in the USA suffer in obesity.Specially teenage people because they intake substantial amount of fastfood in their daily life than any other parts of the world.It is also possible to say in order to prevent tax in fastfood.
One the other hand fastfood and fastfood related food items are growing business, it is also severly potential.As a result, unemployed young people can be able to manage their earnings byb involve themselves producing fastfood.
Another reason, why i agree with the opinion is that eating extra fastfood lead to occcour heart deases,high pressure,piles, diabetis etc.
Take medical report in Bangladesh as an example.A huge amount of young and teenagers suffer in diabetis,heart deases because they were used to with fastfood everyday and regularly.I strongly believe it is possible to plummet these deleterious deases if people try to be concious about extra intaking fastfood.What is more by intaking tax by government it is possible to keep away general people from fastfood.Aftermath entire people specially young and teenage people recede back to theirt healthy and sound life without any harmfull deases.In conclusion, allthough it is a common believe that fastfood and fastfood related business business lucrative for young people .i believe fastfood gradually drive of people from eating organic superfruits,nutrious vegetable from their daily food habitat.Personally i think it is an effective way to impose on fastfood and fastfood related circumstances by government in order to deal with the disadvantages of the consumption of exorbitant fastfood.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52486187845 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2715487224 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 301.271571842 49.4020404114 610% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 400.0 106.682146367 375% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.4 20.7667163134 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.2 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229156456105 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136520360555 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961040930769 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136520360555 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961040930769 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 50.2224549098 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.92 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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