It is often said that children learn best by observing the behavior of their adults and copy it
To what extent do you think the given statement is right
there are those who have considered that the advertisement is supposed to be entirely banned. Personally, I think it is absolutely an appalling idea which not only lessens people's welfare but also imperils company economy.
For the company, there are certainly negative economic aspects of totally banning all advertisements. On the one hand, if a company can not advertise its products which will decrease its exposure rate and turn markets into a monopoly. For example, although an obscure company has superb products, it still can not surpass a time-honored brand because no one knows that brand. On the other hand, presently many companies provide various free platforms for people because of adequately advertising funds. Such as Youtube and Facebook, to maintain quality systems for the user which need sufficient advertising.
Furthermore, banning advertising is undoubtedly disrupts people's well-being even though their health. First, it will restrict people to obtain diverse information throughout advertising. Moreover, as progressive technology which can let customers acquire more accurate advertisement. Therefore, without advertising, customers will unable to shop around breezily. Second, since advertising usually appears between TV programs every thirty minutes which seems very annoyed; nevertheless, doctors always suggest having brief rest time when continuously elevated eyes pressure. Thus, even if people were not interested in advertising, they are still compelled to rest.
In conclusion, we can not ignore the significance of advertising, however, it is still a vital element to exist in society and also an important catalyst for growth in the modern world. advertisements should be constrained but not eliminated utterly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84496124031 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07462813048 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705426356589 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2145987229 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0125429438103 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00449581150156 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0114842302098 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00922659343121 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103088365924 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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