Some people think that children should learn geography in school. However, some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion?
it is believed that geography should be a compulsory subject at school whereas others think learning subjects which relate to our life is more crucial. I partly agree with this view and my following essay will turn out some evidences to prove it.
on the one hand, it is understandable why many people hold the belief of learning geography at educational institutes. to begin, geographical courses provide learners fundamental knowledge about the world. to be specific, students have opportunities to discover landscapes in their country but also beyond the boundaries to acknowledge about the opposite hemisphere of the equator. furthermore, by learning geography they can know the history of earth formulation leading to actions to protect our planet from being impared.
On the other hand, I reckon not only geography but other subjects are a mass influence on our life. first, some scientific classes are necessary for people because it help them to improve their logical thought. consequently, they can become successful in other fields such as business. moreover, students ought to be taught humanity lessons ,for example literature or psychology in order to better mental life. it means that there have more sympathy amongst human being ,as a result, the rate of happiness will increase starkly.
in conclusion, both geography and others subjects are equally momentous and have a number of benefit for leaners so that formal education had better have them in their curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30084745763 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83971341478 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665254237288 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1440983006 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265426857796 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084248243543 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958789298901 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155088423025 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100230536557 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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