Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
These days, the trend of migration of people to urban regions is burgeoning, therefore metropolises are becoming overcrowded. This essay suggests that lack of accommodation and traffic congestion are two of the biggest adversities caused by this phenomenon and argues that opening employment opportunities and encouraging society to use public transport are two viable solutions.
In regard to the complications, the prominent one is the scarcity of living zone. That is to say, a majority of the crowd is migrating to the metropolitan field for employment, and they require flats for residence, which creates the obstacle of lack of area, as a result, either they have to pay high rents or live in pathetic conditions, thus this further gives rise to poor living conditions. Taking many developed downtown of Punjab as an example, individuals used to live in slums in suburbs due to the unavailability of residential buildings in the vicinity of the city. Apart from this, traffic jams are another contributing issue. Nowadays, individuals prefer to use civil vehicles due to safety and convenience rather than using national transport that helps to increase the number of motorways on roads and create the difficulty of long jams on intersections.
In terms of solutions, opening up new business vistas in the rural range can help to combat this grave issue to a certain extent. In other words, most of the multitudes who shift to the urban arena are work seekers, if they find employment in their own place, it will reduce the need of moving to another place. For instance, recently, a cotton industry is set up in my local settings which provides work to a number of workers, as a result, 25% of people who have moved to the center came back to join the positions in that factory. Moreover, the authorities should organize awareness campaigns to encourage the masses to use government vehicles for traveling, so that the dilemma of the massive volume of traffic on highways can be alleviated. Furthermore, governing bodies must also pay attention to make reforms in the civic vehicles to motivate humans to use them willingly.
On balance, towns are facing many adversities due to overpopulation in those regions. This essay describes that large congestion and fewer living slots are two prominent issues which can be tackled by adopting appropriate measures such as promoting mutual transport and giving appointments to workers in their local places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, in regard to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14713216958 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95160097384 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583541147132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4634557673 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.428571429 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111422893054 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357050612967 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249122706402 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662448894925 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170218350259 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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