You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for 2 weeks, and you want one of your friends to come with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to accompany you. In your letter, – explain where and when you want to go – give details of the travel, dates and costs involved – describe some of the things you want to do Write at least 150 words
Dear Sarah,
I hope you are doing well. You will be glad to know that I have decided to go overseas to spend my 15 days vacation, and want to invite you to this surprise overseas holiday.
As you know that I love to explore new places, and I have been waiting for a long time to visit New Zealand. This month, I get 20 days' leave from my employer. I am sure that you will be free after your graduation examinations, so I have already decided to take you with me. We will leave on 17 September and the flight would take off from Moral. There is a stay for one day in a 5-star hotel and the next day we will reach our destination. The package costs $1000 for one, and if we go both, they would provide a 35% discount on the total price.
I know you are the kind of person who likes to go shopping, therefore it would be a great time for us to purchase clothes from renowned stores present over there. Moreover, there is a beautiful city named queen's land, which I have seen many times on Television. Apart from this, I recognize the one You Tuber family, if we got a chance we would visit them for sure.
Eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours Truly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22421524664 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25301405054 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3472542301 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308283490786 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110093040918 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860853509819 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192775341986 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687026304462 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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