Nowdays, we concious about both of the national and international news. But what is the most effective method for dealing with this argument. Some people believe that focous on their country's news is more lucrative instead of international news. In this essay i will discuss both of this argument and draw a conclusion.
firstly, international news is much more complicated issue rather than national news or local news. People often have this opinion because Most of the people have little bit of idea about international History, Diplomacy, Geography and other international politics related circumstances. For instance most of the people of Bangladesh awkward about international affairs. For that reason they can not understand international news and it’s value. Subsequently for this reason major proportion of people can not understand international news and it's precise meaning of influence in the world. If international news can hold any meaning as same as like indigenous news, then obviously people will put much more attention in international or word wide news.
One the other hand there is a common believe that own country's news and other news related stuff inevitably related with international news. The main reason for believing this is that international multiple occarences have deep influence in native or indigenous news. Take US international policy as an example .US political decisions and amendment can change the situation in Iraq, Afganisthan and other countries where ware is existing with Nato and other militia groups. The example scrunize that people have to emphesise international news as same as like news in their country. As a result they can understand their own political news and other kind of country's crucial news easily. News will be much more interesting for people.
In conclusion, although it is a common think that awareness about focousing own country news is important rather than international news. I believe, international news is more important for people than their own country's news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00337700556 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471875 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1571135423 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8888888889 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462703358047 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187154753816 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107380451593 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333906676611 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463534981255 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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