The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart indicates the difficulties people at different age groups who settle down in a new country encounter. In general, it is revealed by the chart that the percentage of people having these problems varied according to their ages. While younger age groups find making friends the most problematic, the elderly have trouble using local languages.
The proportion of those who find learning a foreign language difficult is the largest among the oldest age group, with approximately 55 %. Whereas, the figures for the middle-aged and young adults are far lower, at 35 and 30% respectively.
In comparison, the proportion of people having problems in forming a relationship is smaller. In particular, 45% of young people aged from 18-34, experience this. This is a little higher than the figure recorded among the middle-aged (36%) while the percentage of senior citizens who suffer from this is only a half as high, at 23%.
In contrast to their language-learning difficulties, finding accommodation is not as worth considering in senior citizens as in younger age groups when only one-fifth of them face up to it. However, this is the greatest concern among those aged between 35 and 54 with nearly 40 %, and this is also the percentage of the youngest age group who are struggling to cope with the same problem.
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- People nowadays spend their free time less actively than in the past Do you agree or disagree 86
- Happiness if often considered difficult to define Why is this What factors determine happiness 87
- Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important 61
- The diagram below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years The evolution of the horse with particular emphasis on the changing foot structure 78
- Some people believe a country can benefit a lot from university education Others believe sending a large number of young students to university leads to unemployment Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in general, in particular, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0504587156 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95325496292 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2145496058 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913884103161 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499395433677 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535485755081 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603984353867 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544526505715 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.