In recent time, majority of people leave their home country and immigrate to other place and this has a significant impact on society. This eassy will explain the main reason of immigration as well as it is consequences.
To begin with, overall the world, most of the people want to move in other countries, it has a lot of reasons. one of the major reason is that people want to live in developed country for better life style. People believe that if they immigrate to other nations so they search for better job opprtunities and get a higher income. Which helps to secure their future and enhance the quality of living. Take Indian people as an example, The Indian citizens especially
youngsters are move to other countries such as Canada, Australia and England because indian people get the high packages jobs in these developed nations and they live lixuary life style rather than those life live in India. Another reason is that numerous students give a preference to immigration in the whole world. Some time student want to get specilization in their praticular field but they do not have any study in their own nation so they decided to move other coutry for completing their education. After that they will receive a lot of opportunities in future.
On the other hand, despite having the a lot of benefits, immigration also carry few consequences. Firstly, when people move and do job in other nations as consequences the economy of home nation will be decline and it face a lot of financial troubles in future. For Instance, Today India face finical crasis because a large number of the population immigrate and they do jobs in that country. The government of India are not able to fulfil the huge amount of income that they raised from those people who live in other countries. Secondly, immigration are also become a problem of other countries which people are start living. Numerous people start living in foreign countries which are caused by increasing population as well as they occupy the job of local people.
To conclude, people are able to secure their future and live a better life style when they live in a developed country. Immigration is not only generated a problem for the home country but it is also a huge issue for foreign countries and their local citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82278481013 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56072414049 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445569620253 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9049283311 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117483144509 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539270977962 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612574464681 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928691574442 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738364897387 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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