Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Other believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
The preservation of cultural heritage is currently under debate with controversial views, one of which is that it attracts no attention from the public, the other suggests that keeping old -fashioned lifestyle alive is still indispensable to people. This essay will cover both and elucidate why I stand for the latter opinion.
On the one hand, preserving traditional customs is still a vital part in the modern society since they are passed down from our ancestors. By this way, they embed ourselves to our roots so that the origins of us will not be forgotten. Moreover, they are also economically beneficial, given that foreign tourists are obsessed with distinctive nature and charming colors of an ethnic. The Den Hung festival in Vietnam is a prime example with hundreds of culture enthusiasts around the world paying millions of Vietnam Dong to get to see the local praising the merits of their forefathers and going through the entire length of the country’s history. It is therefore, agreed that these thousand-year-old sentimental values will permanently play a crucial role.
On the other hand, some hold the point that those values have already faded away from public interest. As the world is altering day by day, some signatures of cultures might soon be behind the time, or even considered so adversely inappropriate that they are widely boycotted, such as the Asian patriarchies. However, these concepts are just negligible parts and should not be equated with the whole, for which this essay dismiss that no one is willing to maintain the traditions. The patriarchies in this regard also exemplify this, owning to the fact that their existence is only in remote, underdeveloped communities and threatened to be erased by the regional authorities.
To conclude, having analyzed both sides, I’m convinced that the maintenance of traditional culture is the priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the deepest'.
Suggestion: with the deepest
... entire length of the country’s history with deepest gratefulness. It is therefore, agreed t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30163934426 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97974168702 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629508196721 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9100930996 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172435130703 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582300860038 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041170950912 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110676228208 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293461723981 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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