Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. other believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Culture is a neccessary part of every region and it is a duty of individuals to defend their traditions. Howerver, most argued that masses have no interest in conserve the customs of their region, while others think it is crucial to preserve the moral values. I am in favour of latter notion and this essay will articulate both views in the upcoming paragraphs.
Nowadyas, most people want to change their living standards and they also follow the western styles. To illustrate it, the advent of technolgy assist to civilians to acquire knowlegde about other cultures, traditions, rituals as well as lifestyles, so sometimes they changed their way of life by adapting the other regions traditions and it may cause to taking away people from their culture. For example, every year innumerable people migrate in USA to live a better life and also get a lot of opportunities, but they do not pay attention to stay with their culture even though they are lived in an anonther country. Hence, that is why, maral values are not saved by individuals.
On the filp side, it is undeniable that culture is play essential role in the every persons life. So, it must be protect by residents. In other words, culture gives knowledge to people about their ancestors, traditonal habitants and ritulas. If masses would preseve their traditions, then they can pass knowlegde about their civilizations to the upcoming genrations. Not only civilians, but regime also take initiaves to maintain their moral values, government can encourage their residents and also can organise campus in the schools or universities to give knowlegde about traditions to the children. Therefore, that is why, it is important to save cultural values.
To conclude, although, it is not bad thing to acquire knowlegde about other cultures or moral values, but it is also essential for people to conserve their cultural values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ure is play essential role in the every persons life. So, it must be protect by residen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74885667465 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6487430742 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257841830444 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851647580107 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546059091734 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158583426328 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234256211039 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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